Tuesday, April 27, 2010

The revised draft of a novel

After the first project is the first thing to do Read the story from beginning to end, as if for the first time and how someone else has written. If an author chooses to make the best of his abilities, he will see flaws in the story with ease. It is crucial to understand that objectivity is not always easy to every author, even if he thinks that he can be very critical about his own work.
Total:
Seriously, all of the history is necessary. What is the message of the story? Is this a central theme of hidden somewhere or delete is the central theme or message? A fundamental message of love, forgiveness, resistance, the truth is important because it holds together the story and creates depth.
The beginning of the novel:
How does the story begin? Is it to start with a bang, then fizzle out after or has easy to start, but keep up with a memorable sentence, paragraph or section to the reader and start reading, then the complexity? One thing to keep in mind is that the most successful novels and long stories easy to start to track the reader with a first goal, before hard times. Thus, the main character is up will be set up properly, and after he returned to his normal life upside down, it will be enough time to go through changes.
Land and scenes:
The show is a history of episodic act or the act is a climate? An episodic plot is a general history, which consists of episodes. Each of these episodes can stand on its own, even if it is a central idea with the same characters linked, as in Sandra Cisneros The House on Mango Street or in the TV sitcoms.
A plot is a climate that a particular story arc has peak towards the end. If a writer has a conspiracy climate, and the chances he is doing, he must verify that it build the story advances through the scenes, the dramatic tension and then to see the control of every scene, whether it has a clear goal and if it The reader wondering what will be happen. Here are the most important scenes from history and make it even more spectacular will increase its effectiveness. This may at least partly by an increase in conflict in every scene and even the inclusion in the tension between the characters, which may be on the same page.
Viewpoint:
The question is: Is the story told from the perspective of the right character for them or if the story would be better if all the other character he has said? For example, if Captain Ahab had Moby Dick has been said that history would be very different, even if the protagonist is Ahab. Instead, a fantastic job Ismael, which tells the story. The same is true of Fitzgerald's The Great Gatsby, the quality of life could be brought by the words of Nick Carraway.
The main character:
Here are some of the writers are able to ask questions. The main character has to cut a clear goal, that only he can achieve through their own initiative, even if the target is not easy for the protagonist in the beginning of the story? Is the main character deep enough? Was there a character sheet for him, and if not, we can do now to see if his character and the changes he has lived with her part?
Is the main character is not dramatic? A person who is, to a certain problem or challenge of life in spite of his pain remedy acts a dramatic character. A character need to act if he is injured and the result of his actions may make empathy or even worse some kind of emotion from readers.
Is there an unresolved problem of the past of the protagonists, which fits with the theme and has a direct influence on the story? Is it implied or stated directly? If the answer is Yes to these questions means that the novel is a deeper, otherwise an unsolved problem that the actions could have influenced the protagonists can be added.
So what does the protagonist is not the darkest hour? And if his darkest hour come? One thing to keep in mind: the darkest hours before dawn could apply the protagonist and the story arc.
The end:
The end of the novel is coming along lines of logical thought. An unhappy ending is not a literary narrative, it shocks the reader and leaves him disappointed. disappoint On the other hand, an end to Hollywood as much as it is the work of the writer is not forced seems mild.
Chapter:
Then seriously, the chapter is required. Then a chapter starts a bit later? How exciting is open enough to arouse the reader's attention? Have all the chapters of the novel begins the same way? It is a good idea to open each chapter and review the opening of these issues.
Terminations chapter should also cover quality, ask the reader what is to come later examined. The questions could be asked here: the end of May or the previous chapters can be added?; What all the chapters at the end the same way?
Dialog:
Will realistic dialogue enough? The dialogue is of the action in the history of ever? Perhaps most memorable dialogue in any way? To answer the last question, it is advisable to play with regard thinking about how to make each line a point.
The decoration of the story:
It is now time to see, hear, feel, smell, taste and as much as possible to add descriptions and scenes.
Find the "saying" part of the story is as follows. Is that a part would be appropriate or if the story was to show better be used instead. A writer can not say always and forever. A rule of thumb, show 80% against 20%.
Change the overused words and find seem to be the passive verb forms appear, brand, etc. - and decide if they are needed or whether an active verb would be to make history more interesting would be considered.
Finally comes the editing of the novel sentence construction, punctuation, spelling and other aspects of grammar.

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